One to one session:
During my one to one session my lecturer and I spoke about the following points.
- My concern that my writing style is becoming too casual - shouldn't be a concern during the first year, however during the second year I may wish to go back to a formal style.
- I should be backing up my notes and paragraphs with quotes from the individuals / references we have looked at as not only does this demonstrates my understanding of examples we have talked about, but it also backs up my arguments and makes my statements convincing. This is especially important as so far my lecturer says he has found my writing very interesting and likes it when 'my voice' shows on the page. However, 'my voice' is not backed up by enough (if any) references that I can choose to agree with or not. Adding these will assist me in getting me a higher grade.
- Write more about my own opinions on each session as so far what I have written has not always been detailed enough.
- Obviously need to make sure that all my references are fully recorded which I recognise is something I need to do.
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