Advice from my lecturer on my introduction (6/3/2014)

* Today my lecturer looked over my introduction and gave me the following advice...

• If I am referring to a book or even website then say so since ‘Ondskapens filosofi’ [The Philosophy of Evil] (2010) by Lars Fr. H. Svendsen confused him. Thus I need to mention that it is a book. 
• Remove words like 'firstly' in order to make it sound more formal.
• Use Wikipedia references, not the sites themselves since those can be edited by anyone. 
• Don't use the 'Free Dictionary, use the Oxford one as it is more academic. 
• Mention the occupations of the people I quote from since these can add to their importance and relevance e.g. scientist, doctor, professor etc.

Overall, the lecturer is really interested it is so far and likes the Western (ideological) and Eastern (mythological) examples of good and evil I have used.

* I then went back over my previous posts from last term and year one in order to see if anything I had originally covered would be relevant to my project. Unfortunately I couldn't find anything relevant.